I like it. I think most of us have felt something similar to this at some time and so it was easy to relate to this. You've described these emotions so well.

By the way, I think the fourth stanza is especially sensual.

Good work as usual Holli.

oh wow when i was reading this i could relate to every single word lol, and read it again, thank you for sharing

"Love and Covet." I loved that line :D

The second stanza was beautiful; it reminded me of the breath of Angels for some reason.

"It does not come." Full of angst!

~Isca

Although you haven't edit just yet, it's still really good. But it makes me wondered what you were thinking at the time when you wrote this.