Aww, just AW.

O.o I have never made a one-shot and you seem like you're a pro at it. I wish I could, but I can never get an idea good enough to pack it onto one chapter. Mine always have to be dragged on. T.T

-Leanne

very cute :)

random but cute all the same! good job.

This was so sweet..:) J'adore.

This is so cute! I love the huge variety of all the things he does to her, but in the end, it doesn't matter because she loves him and he loves her, so it's all OK.

Aw!

Awesome! It was very sweet.

Hey!

Finally missy! I've been waiting for a oneshot from you for ages! Literally! lol

Aw, but this was so cute! I love how you wrote it all starting with 'he makes me'! -squeals!-

Anywho, loved this! Write moree! :D

HC

xx

aw thats so cute, i loved it.

Wow! It was so cute! And sweet!

Very well written :D

Gup

Wow.

I really liked that.

A LOT.

Great job!

Wow, my life is kind of like that too... except we lost our love along the way.

I really like this, and how repetitive the 'he makes' are. It flows nicely.

Just to critique, I think the line "when he sees something innuendo-y on anything he sees." would sound better if you used a different word for 'sees' the first time, so you aren't using the same word too much. :) But that's just constructive critisism, I think it's fine the way it is.

Anyway, bottom line: I like this. :D