|Reviews for He Makes Me|
| Airhead 7/5/09 . chapter 1
Aww, just AW.
| SugarCraziiness 7/3/09 . chapter 1
O.o I have never made a one-shot and you seem like you're a pro at it. I wish I could, but I can never get an idea good enough to pack it onto one chapter. Mine always have to be dragged on. T.T
| paraNormal 6/29/09 . chapter 1
very cute :)
| Hazelnut Romance 5/16/09 . chapter 1
random but cute all the same! good job.
| blurrylights 12/23/08 . chapter 1
This was so sweet..:) J'adore.
| Lian Bynum 11/29/08 . chapter 1
This is so cute! I love the huge variety of all the things he does to her, but in the end, it doesn't matter because she loves him and he loves her, so it's all OK.
| Sakurelle 10/25/08 . chapter 1
Awesome! It was very sweet.
| Hopelessly Cliche 10/24/08 . chapter 1
Finally missy! I've been waiting for a oneshot from you for ages! Literally! lol
Aw, but this was so cute! I love how you wrote it all starting with 'he makes me'! -squeals!-
Anywho, loved this! Write moree! :D
| Big Boots Man Of War 10/24/08 . chapter 1
aw thats so cute, i loved it.
| pinkguppie 10/23/08 . chapter 1
Wow! It was so cute! And sweet!
Very well written :D
| NattyAwesome 10/23/08 . chapter 1
I really liked that.
| trying 10/23/08 . chapter 1
Wow, my life is kind of like that too... except we lost our love along the way.
I really like this, and how repetitive the 'he makes' are. It flows nicely.
Just to critique, I think the line "when he sees something innuendo-y on anything he sees." would sound better if you used a different word for 'sees' the first time, so you aren't using the same word too much. :) But that's just constructive critisism, I think it's fine the way it is.
Anyway, bottom line: I like this. :D