unexpectedly refreshing, unrelentingly fantastic.

"peeling the sun off the sky" and then objectifying it with a rich metaphor about its own cheapness? oh come on, that is damn good and the contrast stirs me up more than it maybe ought to.

not just placing them in sentences but being able to play with your words is always satisfying and predicts a nice visible audible flow.

seeing that the genre is "spiritual" crystallized the subtle existence of more magic than my first official read. even the title is peculiarly appealing. i feel that this is some especially wondrous and romantically meditative trance upon which i'm glad to have stumbled.

:)

it's different from normal for you

i like it very much

then again, something about (like yours at the beginning) lower-case letters is just so aescetically pleasing to me haha...

anyway the words in this are just really great

Wow.

very good, solid and well written