this is really good.
Really! you deviate completely from the typcial norm,.. where the women falls in love with her rapist. yuck.. some people can be sick.
ilike the realism you have implemented
keep it up
wuuhuu! yeah~

I love this story! It's incredibly interesting. Please update soon!

What happened to the updates? Love the story and hope you didn't abandon it... I really love your story, update!
Hugs from Caroline..

Hey I know you've put this on hiatus, but I just wanted to let you know that I've loved reading it up to this far! I hope one day you decide to continue this! (I just finished reading To Feel the Sun and enjoyed reading that too. Maybe it's because I'm a music major I appreciate all the accurate music references lol.)

That was absolutely brilliant. I could practically feel the emotions of each character, and was actually able to empathize with them. Kathy wasn't as bad as Alice seemed to think, but that just shows another side to her.

i really like this so far, cant wait to read more update soon!

Oh! It was worth the wait. I like that their relationship isn't flying along unnaturally fast.

I just got mind FXd with this story! Haha I was looking through my story alerts just to check on some and I remembered yours and then I looked at the story for a couple minutes.


And what do you know a couple minutes later I get an email from fictionpress!!
Have to say that was totally awesome!

Good chapter, Johnny's so sweet!

Yo! Lex from SKoW here! Just started reading this- it's great!

It was a long time coming but it was good.

Oh who cares if it was short? It rocked!

um update soon? XD

Excellent! I really hope Alice gets over her anxiety disorder, she seems like a genuinely sweet person. And what's with that part where the guy in the gym called her a freshman?
Update soon!

love it!

Yay for having friends but she should eat!

Hey :)
Anoher great chapter, I really enjoyed it! Please, Please update soon I want to know what happens next :D