woah that was good! just a tad bit random, but still mesmerizing. oh god, now i'm starting to sound like one of those reviewers that doesn't really know you! the horror! but you should- scratch that, you HAVE to write another chapter! i must admit, this does seem to be the best of your stories. wow they should make October 23 a national holiday: you actually suceeded in writing something good! lol jk

interesting character. though she does seem to have anger issues, just like someone i know ;). i would NOT want to be the gut who dumped her, if that's what happened. one way to find out: WRITE!

ps- are you still pis*ed off?

Another spontaneous story huh Jaime? I like this one, it's mysterious and suspenseful, but for gods sake don't give up on it!
...or even better, you should save it for NaNoWriMo and be forced to finish it! (read the email I sent you)
I like this one the best of your stories actually. Seems like a good idea.