 raewolf 2009-01-17 . chapter 1I love how you write!! I really only had time to skim it, but I mean to go back and read it more carefully. The only thing that I can say in means of critique is that some of your dialouge isn't very natural.. Except of course when your character was talking to the psychologist or Katie... Your description however is something I aspire to achieve myself. Keep writing, your good. |