Okay, short and quick now, long in-depth later, yes? Go!

Description has improved! Linebreaks or something to let transition happened is needed! The trees' appearance-to-importance is rather random! The story is much easier to read! The way it is described, it sounds as if Haruhiko touched the blood! I like where this is going and am curious to read more!

There we are. Short, quick, to the point, and with plenty of exclamation marks. Onto the next story then.