Drabbles are good! I forgot to freaking review when you updated. I dumb!
Again, an incredible chapter. The relation is so fascinating, and you can't help but want more. It's an extremely unconventional story. Please update!
Love, Dani who is listening to Yiruma

Oh so very intriguing.

I like it but it's just a bit hard to read at some parts because you jump tenses. Sometimes it's past, sometimes it's present. I personally like past best, but no matter which tense you choose, you have to stick with it. :)

Yay dabbles! Their so easy to read and its easy to put all sorts of poeticness in them!
Anywho, I like how your making them both have different worlds but still putting the similarities in there. Me likes! But the one thing I caught was you forgot the second s in class when you said he didn't usually go to that class.
Keep on writing!;D

seems interesting :) write more chapters for this story please

I really like this one. It's different than the ones I've read. It focuses on both people instead of just one and.. I don't know. It's just.. Different. =)
Keep on going! I want to know what happens!

I'm gonna do an actual review. Excited? Yeah. And what is up with these character limits? Stupidstupidstupid. ):

"She stared at the ceiling, waiting. Waiting for the day to begin, waiting for the wonderful smells from the kitchen to waft into her room. Waiting for her alarm to ring."

This is good. Very good.

"Shucking off her clothes"

Shucking is forever associated in my mind with corn on the cob... Heehee.

"Not real. Not real. Not real."

Good line to repeat.

"which was a clas"

Missed an 's' there, darling(:

"He betted with himself that if he told them to jump off a cliff because he'd be there, waiting to catch them at the bottom, they would."

What a nasty boy.

", after al."

One too many 'l's.

"First words. His heart began to beat a little faster as he followed her into the library."

Awh.

Well, I like this a lot.

Please write more.

much love, chewzzy. (:

One; I love your pen-name. Chewychewychewychewy!

Second, I like your story a lot, so far. It's descriptive, and it isn't thoughtless. It's nice; I love rain a super lot, and we never get it... -.-

So, it's cool. Like, a lot. The description, and especailly the way the girl doesn't catch his eye in the very begining, blush, and run away; just to think and think and think about him for the rest of the day.

Also, I listened to the song.
It's supergood.

:D

It's...pretty cool.

I feel sorry for the girl, because her thoughts sound so sad. And I would like to see just how the boy and the girl get together if they're going to, if they've only exchanged two sentences with each other.

Anyway, I like the story, and I hope to read more of it soon!

P.S. I'm sorry if my review isn't up to my normal standards. It's rather late where I am, and my brain is dead.

I must be one of your pretties, then >.<

I like. very intriguing opening. I want to see more of this boy and his "they were nothing" attitude, and this girl, too, who's all sunshine-y about rain. (I've always loved rain.)

Also, you were right. "Kiss The Rain" is realy pretty, and it fits really well with the tone of the story.

I love this story! So cute! Urgh, I need a better adjective than cute.
But, you get my point. I LOVE THIS STORY!! KEEP IT UP!
Forever Yours,
Erin

Wow, I love this story so far! (probaly jut because I also really like staring at rain...)
I love how you called the girls "wretched harpies" very clever!
Keep on writing:D

This seems interesting. :) Keep it up.

O i like it!!
update!

OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD! The writing in it was amazing, for one, and the idea of it was, well, refreshing. It wasn't a cliche, it had meaning. It was just about a normal girl, and a normal guy, who understand the simple things. I really respect you going out there and creating this phenomenal idea, and writing this unbelievable piece. It's a force to be reckoned with.
Love, Dani (Read my stories! :?)