Oh my golly, I couldn't stop reading this when I started it today! It's officially one of my favorites now! I think you should have the series published! Mhmm, not take it off fictionpress though. Okay, maybe have your next new works published. That's how good they are! It's actually quite impressive how creative and original you built their world! Thumbs up! :)

This is my favorite in the Sun Series along with Sun in the Mist. I really enjoyed reading your stories. Your stories are very well-written. Your stories are awesome!

I absolutely love it, though it had heavy drama and I cried a lot.

thanks for the wonderful story!! :D :D :D
it's REALLY cute. :] :] :] i loved it!!

Aw!

DAMN that was HOT!

That was fantastic as per usual, although i felt that the ending went really quickly, like they didnt realy get time to reconcile, or talk through all the things theyd done to eachother, or rather, we didnt get to see it. This one had me hooked all the time though, from the sheer amount of times they fell out and i wasnt sure what was going to happen.

Wow, im feeling some intense emotions right now, that was terrible! Poor Grif! and of course Mak!

I dont know if its just me, but Grifs description sounded beautiful, though the whole feathers on face thing is quite hard to imagine. Ive been looking forward to this one, the speed to which ive read these stories is a testament to how much i love them - 4 books in 4 days i think :D

i my days i love all your stories in the sunshine sequal

Undeniably, this was my favourite one so far. I loved this story - so much so that I re-read the ending over and over again because I enjoyed it so much. Now my only grumble is whether on not the series will ever be finished. I hope you'll reply to this review as I'm sure there are others waiting for the penultimate story of this collection. Keep up your amazing work!

Sorry this was the url I meant to put on:

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This story was, by far, my favourite in the sun series. I couldn't stop crying at times and the characters were lovely. I found this on getting published and it might help you:

/publishing/howto.publish/howto.publish.htm

see how that goes...he has some good tips on what to do.

hiya

another great book - well done.

Angel

I'll keep checking back for the next in the series, but your family definitely comes first. :) Have fun with those kids, and just remember they grow up fast!