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MarloCarlo10 2009-11-15 . chapter 22
I'm all for Carson and Shelly!!

Haha I hate the Jo Bros but I will admit I have one song on my ipod by them ;)

I kinda hope she gets over Matt because I think even he liked her and dumped Christine for her, she wouldn't do that to her sister...at least, I don't think she would.

Good chap!
dancingbananas 2009-11-15 . chapter 22
omg i love carson! he and shelly are so perfect! i dont rly think matt and shelly could ever work, it would ruin christine and shellys relationship as sisters. sorry about school :( update wen u can! looking forward to the next chapter and hoping for more carson >:)
elanbu 2009-11-09 . chapter 22
ahh! it's so exciting that you've updated again. i like carson, he sounds fun. whenever he's in the story, i can't help but see the guy in maria mena's video 'you're the only one' though..
Geminiwriter93 2009-11-08 . chapter 22
Awesome update I loved it :D. I think Carson and Shelly are cute together but I still want Matt and Shely toether:P Update soon! :D
mells 2009-11-07 . chapter 22
i loved it :)

i think carson and her are cute together..but i still like matt better :P

update soon!
funnechick 2009-11-07 . chapter 22
Love Carson and Shelly! I'm so glad she didn't get caught in her lie. At the end of the date, for a minute there, I thought he was going to kiss her on the cheek or something, but their moment was still awesome.

Good luck with school...I'm feeling the stress, too :(
AlphaBeatKayGee 2009-11-07 . chapter 22
I LOVE Carson...so much! He just seems like the coolest. Uhmm...yes...you did take lightyears to update..sorry about school and uh...till next chapter i guess..i request more Carson!
psycho angel 2009-11-07 . chapter 22
it was amazing!
you have no idea how happy i was to see that the story has been updated i was practically bouncing on my seat.
Wow the story just took an incredible twist.
i think Carson and Shelly were really cute together, but i still want her to end up with Matt.
Arashiku 2009-11-06 . chapter 22
Very very wonderful chapter ^^ I enjoyed it SO much I started squealing in the beginning of it XD Im so glad to see an update >< Dont worry, take your time. A good story doesn't always have to go fast and end fast :P If that makes sense XD Anyways Carson and Shelly are so cute together ^^ But I guess Im still hoping for this new dude i have no idea why? Anywho, great chapter and I CANNOT wait for the next :) I love thsi story alot and you're a terrific writer! Keep up teh good work :D Hope you dont get too stressed out. School is a pain and full of stress and pressure huh? Its been taking a toll on my writing time too XD At least youre still writing and awesomely at that (: Haha ignore my randomness :P LOVED THIS and will continue to LOVE IT even more XD cant wait!!
XxXxNoRmAl IS oVeRaTeDxXxX 2009-10-24 . chapter 21
update already!
flavorrrrxx 2009-09-20 . chapter 21
cody!! cody would be perfect for her if shed only realize! hes already in love with her!!(: thanx for the update!
Arashiku 2009-09-19 . chapter 21
I really loved this chapter and I CANNOT wait till the next update! I've been waiting forever for this and Im so happy to see this chapter! >< Yeah, I totally know what you mean. School bound is so annoying =.= Matt and Cody are both cute ^^ I seriously CANT wait for the awesome chapter, I just know its gonna be a great date! Anyways its so obvious that lil Cody likes her X3 Poor him but hes got Aiz now right? And I think that Shelly hasn't met her right guy yet :P Matt is cool but its gonna difficult and complicated. A new guy would definitely make it VERY interesting XD haha anyways I really enjoyed this alot :D Wonderfully done.
She watched the seasons fade. 2009-09-19 . chapter 21
yeah,girl school can be tough...it's killing me right now! Aww, Cody liked/likes her! I so knew it! And I honestlyy don't know whom she should be with...this is confusing! Post soon!

=)
Risse-Cup-Cullen 2009-09-19 . chapter 21
I just wanna say that i love this story and that i like Cody for Shelly the best out of all of them...and i understand about school and everything. It's cool. :) Ciao!
mells 2009-09-19 . chapter 21
more!

shelly and matt can be bffl's
but i think in the end shelly and cody will be together :)
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