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citrus traffic 2008-10-25 . chapter 1
wow, i almost feel bruised just reading this.
its great, i just wish i didnt know how much pain
your feeling. god knows you dont deserve it.
i still love you k, i dont know if thats worth much
to you anymore, but its true.

x.N
Isca 2008-10-24 . chapter 1
"I just loved you despite it all." Wow...

This is so sad, but I think it's also the beginning of closure and 'letting go' of an unattainable love.

*HUGS*
~Isca
fairytale failure 2008-10-24 . chapter 1
WOW. That actually made my eyes feel like they wanted to start crying. Your writing is just so real, and heartfelt, it has a big emotional impact. My favourite part was when you had one stanza about how you had built them up into something perfect, and in the next stanza you contradict that. I also loved 'you always manage to find someone better for you that me,/but i still haven’t found anyone better for me than you.'
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