i love it! it was amazing- it had a good plot line, really orignal! i can't wait for the sequel and i definatly think that you should make it into a book and try to get it published!
charlotte

Nice story. I look forward to reading the second book.

HI i just came across your story and i found it interesting so I started to read it. now i'm not a big fan of twilight, more into anne rice and such...though i have read twilight. i'm always on the lookout for stories that really captivate me, and i must say yours really did:) i personally think your story is way better than twilight... :)
although my school work has suffered from my reading addiction it was so worth it :)hope you continue to write many stories in the future

Loved the story!

Wow! I guess thats all I can say. That was pretty immense. But then I just think just about everything you write is awesome but I'm really glad I finally gt around to reading this. It's been sitting in my 'To Read' list for about a year now.

Sian x

PS looking forward to the future with Davy and Roane.

WOW I love this story! I can't wait to read about their next adventure!!

You are an amazing writer keep it up there is so much that awaits you.

WOW

AMAZING is all i can say...actually that's a lie. i don't know if you purposely do this because this is the way your characters think or something, but when referring to people...you use "who" not "that" when you say something like: "the guy who heard you" it's not "the guy that heard you" using the word "that" in that kind of situation is reserved for anything not human, but i think that you can use "who" for human like creatures such as vampires and angels as well.

YOU SHOULD BE PROUD OF THIS STORY. LIKE. SERIOUSLY. IM PROUD OF BEING ONE OF THE PEOPLE WHO READ THIS STORY BEFORE IT BECAME A BOOK. ... 8D I WILL SO BE IN LINE TO BUY IT. SRSLY. SRSLY. ;D

OH MY GOD NO WONDER. no wonder she was stronger than talia and better than all the past immortals- CAUSE THEY WERENT THE IMMORTAL. they just carried on the thread of the immortal to carry on to the REAL immortal so technically talia wasnt the immortal at all. ... THAT IS SO EPIC WIN. YOU = BEST CREATIVITY EVER. SERIOUSLY. MY GOD. i never saw ANY of these coming 8D this is so cool. >.>

OH MY GOD. THE SEXUAL TENSION WITH LUKE AND DAVINA IS DRIVING ME UP A ** WALL. THEY BOTH WANT EACH OTHER LIKE FAK AND THEY BOTH KNOW THIS AND YET DAVY STILL GOES ON THE DATE WITH ADAM. SERIOUSLY.
THE **? LOL.

I STILL LOVE THIS STORY SOSDFKLJSDKLF SO SO MUCH 8D

I have to admit, I was unwilling to read this story earlier. (Twilight has taken a toll on my love for all things supernatural. And vampires. I pretty much ignore anything with the word "vampire" in it.)But this was so, so much better than Twilight. I liked Roane (by the way, I was wondering: do you have a thing for mohawks? Because I've noticed that Roane has one, Brady has one, and Bryce has one too, if I'm not mistaken. Just wondering, is all), but I'd have to say I really, really liked Kates. Davy is amazing and all, but I liked her a lot better in the end than I did in the beginning. But she also changed a lot, so I'm not quite sure how I feel about that.

All I can say is wow!!this is a great story!probably one of THE BEST that I have EVER read on fictionpress!
I can't wait to read the series and I hope it's as great as this one.

So ha, this story is totally adictive and I refused to get up from my seat until I finished it. It was definetely worth the read though. This story is book quality- like a best seller's quality. Seriously. I adore this story. At first, I found it slightly confusing with all the various powers and all.. But you managed to explain it well and tie up everything just perfectly. And your character development and twists- ah, they're lovely too.
And Well, I just simply can't wait to start reading the sequel =)