I love this song, but I never actually heard it xD The lyrics are amazing. I can understand everything here, and I think I know exactly how you were feeling when you wrote this. It seems that everyone hides their emotions all the time and that makes choices so confusing and hard. I can completely relate to everything in it except for the giving up part. Even though I am a pessimist and I feel like giving up sometimes, I just can't give up no matter what.

Nice! I would love how to know how the rythm goes. Good job!

WOW. I really loved this one! I can even sort of relate to it. Great work and please do keep writinn more! I especially loved the bridge...it was too good...all the best for all your writing endeavours!

I think this song has a great rhyme, I like the starting and the chorus.