i love this! i can't wait to see what happens when your characters get a bit older. so far i love evann and adam. keep it up. :]

You've got a good start here. My only suggestion is that you think about the voice of the story. I'm not sure if it's on purpose, but the narration is really formal, and so is some of the dialogue. It makes the story come off as stiff and impersonal. Try a more relaxed writing style, I'm not saying to throw good grammar out the window, just a bit less formal. Other than that I do like the story.