wow this is sad, and beautiful at the same time, i really like this piece thank you for sharing

Night gal, that was one of the best poems I've ever read!
it was the perfect combination of Hurt/Comfort and nature.
your imagery is so effective that you can almost feel the person's emotions yourself.
awesome job! :)

This is... very cliche. It was very tryhard and I skimmed over most of it. The idea is not very original.