Cute :D Some back-story would have been nice, but it was fine as is. Love it!

HAHAHAHA! "S+M...wait a minuet!" Yeah, I so thought that too! But great story. Really cute!

heheheh aww they're so cute x3

VERY good! Although you could have been a tad more descriptive. I still loved it, anyway. I love details.

What an amusing little story. I like that it was short and sweet, even if there were times when it felt like information was missing - most of it was happily supplied further along, so it wasn't a real pain or anything. Well done.

This is very erecting...it was very hott! Nice job. You should have written another chapter, but that is ok. I like how it ended.

tehee. beautiful yaoi!
didn't like it as a oneshot (*whine*) I want it longer!
-Cloudi

that was actually good. i dont usually like yoai stories but this was very good keep up the good work!