 Thornprick 2008-11-15 . chapter 1oh, i love it, it's so sweet but also kinda sad... |
 LadyWinchester 2008-11-14 . chapter 1Hey there ^^ Ahy, this made me smile. it sorta reminded me of Bella and her friends from twilight O.O i dunno why but it did :D
-LadyWinchester |
 WhiteLightningfromSwiftRiver 2008-10-29 . chapter 1Aw, that's so sweet! Is there a reason behind the poem? |
 WhatAboutDolly 2008-10-26 . chapter 1i love this poem! it explains 2 things at once. How friends are an important part of your life, and how you're trying to get over him. GOod Job |
 Abbey Mae 2008-10-26 . chapter 1I like your poem! If only I could relate...
I like how the poem has a sort of structure to it but doesn't rhyme. That way, it is poetic (like a poem should be) but also real. There were a bit of word choice issues such as "unlike how it usually does" that seemed a little awkward when I read it, but that was the only real problem. I really like your style and look forward to more poems. |