i feel bad for him...update soon!?

this is really good! :) i love it. please update soon!

“I… I want a divorce, Jude.”

Jude stared at her with the most bewildered expression. Surely, he misheard her words. She couldn’t have said what he thought she said. Perhaps she wanted a horse?

“I’m sorry. What was that?” he asked.


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That extract was classic :) vicky seems more horny than jude which is unique as normally its the other way round (as in they guy being hornier zan da grl) :D:D (lol)

I like it:) This story has POTENTIAL!!

I love the name Jace! If I ever have a son that's what I want to name him.

I think I'm gonna like this story. S update pronto.

:O

Update like, now.

cantwait for more
hope you update soon
--ifly*hugs*

i have a feeling i'm really going to like this story, please update asap!

Tsk tsk... Even though Chelsea had a kind of good reason to leave him, she shouldn't have.

This was a funny chapter.

Poor Jude though...=(

poor jude! cant wait to read more and see what happens, update soon!

Good first chapters. I look forward to reeading more.

Update soon please

oh how cruel how can you leave your baby?
oh no
she dont deserve them both
its going to be a ride with vicky in the pic now lol
i hope chelsea doesnt come back
she doesnt sound like a sane person lol
cant wait for the next chapter

'icky vicky' reminds me of fairly odd parents babysiter vicky.
great start by the way
i feel sorry for jude
i love it so far.
i love vicky's mom
she likes chocolate like me

This seems like it's going to be a very cute story! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!