What wonderful tension between Whitney, Connor and Stella! LOL Great scene. Interesting to me that Mr. Kessler was willing to leave them alone. I'd have thought the idea of a growing affection between the two of them would have him fuming, not leaving them alone in the barn. Could be interesting to see if his attitude toward Whitney is changing.

Oh my gosh your writing is like 20 times better than mine! I really like it so far : )! Oh and thanks for reviewing!

I absolutely love this story. I know things are hard with school, especially if you're involved in outside activities, but I really think you should post more soon. I adore the characters and want to see what happens between the two couples.

Such a good update! Ah it just get's better and better!

Gah the suspense is killing me! I can't wait for the dance...XD

I just love how you make Whitney and Connor interact with each other. It's so sweet. :)

Hm what are these nightmares plauging poor Whitney?

Great update!

Exciting. At first I thought there was some burglar coming in or some trouble maker. And then whatever bad would result from it, Whitney would be held responsible.

Just a quick note - Ontario is a province, not "providence", haha. I'm sure that's just a typo, though.

Yay! You're back! Great job!

Yay! An update! Just gets better and better!

I love this story! Please keep updating; every chapter I keep wanting more..especially more of Connor! :)

This is very well written, and an interesting read. It all had a very real feel to it, especially the dialogue, which I loved. A lot of good writers have difficulty making the dialogue sound like an actual conversation, but you did it with ease. You also managed to pack a lot of information for the readers into the conversations without making it seem forced.

I didn't like the way the story started. The first couple paragraphs just didn't hook me in too well, although the dream did. I think it would be more effective if you began the story with the dream, without actually revealing that it's a dream/memory until she wakes up.

Oh my goodness, I've been waiting so long for an update and I thought you'd given up! :D But I'm so glad, you made my day when I saw the story alert in my inbox...

This chapter didn't seem forced at all, quite smooth. You're building so much suspense. I can't wait to see what happens at the Singing!

Can't wait for the next update :D

There is always so much to do right before a trip or a move. Definitely can be nervewracking!
I enjoyed the interaction among Whitney, Melissa, and Ethan. I'm sure she will miss her friends, but hope it doesn't take too long to make new ones.
Annie is very cute and I liked the different personalities for all the different characters. I'm wondering if Bethany is truly going to turn out to be mean or if her attitude is just reflecting her disapproval of the modern ways and that she's soften up once she gets to know Whitney. Guess I better keep reading to find out. :)
Oops a couple typos -"She had learned (form)her encounter" =(from). "She bit her lower lip as retreated..." =(as she retreated) or (bit her lower lip and retreated), "sisters" = (sister's)Not that it matters much, but if you're like me you probably want people to point out things like that so you can edit.:)
Great job! The more I read the more attached I get. :)