OMG! This was totally amazing! I was so surprised at the end, wonderful twist!
Narq

I have often wondered, given the length of the thigh compared to that of the torso, just how this position works unless the top is significantly shorter than the bottom or very limber, but that's neither here nor there.

Very funny.

Did you know your summary says "A Kyle and Luke story with a dark twist." Eric?

Luke definitely should top. Then Eric would have another truth about himself that he could deny.

omg aswomeness! love it. very realstic and u should write the cops and robbers one.

-Dommy ^_^

*giggles hysterically*
Twas amazing!
After about three paragraphs I realized what was going on and my mind exploded with,
"YAY!! BDSM!!"
...ahem...

I realized this was roleplay at the candle-wax part.
I don't know how though since you did a wonderful job with keeping everything pretty obscure until the end.
Maybe my psychic abilities kicked in...
...Nah.
It definitely had to do with after all those reviews you left me (green apple lube :D ), roleplay seemed much more likely to come from you than some random story about an Exotic Dancer and a Roman Centurion.
Either way, I loved it.
But I think this review is long enough.
And I have to get back to writing WAC.

...I'm still going to kidnap you.
:P

Very nice!

This was god! I'm still drooling lol

very cute i liked it!

Nice ending :D