*died* Love this so much. It's kind of like a better version of Twilight :P

This killed me so bad :

"Without breaking eye contact, Espen reached for Lucan’s hand and guided it to his crotch.

“Touch me.”"
OH MI GOSH. Hottest. Thing. Ever. Love :D

Love it :D Just one error: 12:46 pm is just past noon, so you probably want 12:46 am :D

Love it :D Just one error: "All looked flourished and excited about something." did you mean flushed?

Another great chapter. I'm curious to see what Roy's up to. Update as soon as you can.

DO IT LUCAN!

Great work!

The beginning of the story seemed a little forced with how everything came together, but towards the middle the story became more fluid and put together. I really enjoy it now and can't wait for the next chapter. Update as soon as you can.

i love how sweet they are.
it warms my heart.
Lucan + Espen forever! lol.

hehe, aww.. poor Kestrel left alone xP
got a feeling that something big's probably gonna happen soon what with Roy there =/
and hope Espen and Lucan make up soon! which I'm sure will happen ;P
Waiting for your next update! :D

Hmm, wonder what going to happen with Roy. I just picture something big is going to happen in the next few few chapters.

Wow freat chapter as always. Congrats it is a really great story and it has kept me interested. However I wanted to know how long do you plan on making it. Still, marvelous writing, very ingenious and it keeps you at the border of your chair whike reading. Keep the great work. My Best Wishes!

X( Poor Kestrel. XP Anyways, great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next!!

aha poor Kestrel feeling all left out like that x].
Lucan stop distancing urself >:o :P
kee on writing!

There's nothing quite like awkward silences to make the comedic relief scratch his head. So, Leland's into Camien, eh? Or is he something else altogether?

Poor espen... at least he tried to seduce him.

Lucan so over protective. I love it!

Bad-boy Roy. He's no match for Lucan.
=]

dun dun dun! x] its good~!! keep writing. lol now my friend is reading it :]