|Reviews for onetwothreesixteen: a sort of wonderful death|
| april and the phantom 7/15/09 . chapter 1
riveting. perfect. & so exact.
| Mourning Sickness 10/27/08 . chapter 1
I've never been able to write something on this topic so honest. You've conveyed the core of the disease expertly.
| SEMMU 10/26/08 . chapter 1
Your title caught my attention; however, after reading the first few lines I realized I'd have a difficult time relating to your topic considering I know no one (personally) that struggles with eating disorders. But nevertheless, I continued to read becuase your work was well written. You included sufficient descriptive details that allowed me to relate to the horrible experience of dying slowly and you used just enough literary devices to keep my attention. My only critique would be that there's a few typos (such as 'me' should be my) that you could easily remedy with a single revision.
Good job and Write On!