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Neon 2008-10-28 . chapter 1
wow

this story is the single most random but yet perfect thing imaginable. It's strange but i loved every single word of it, seriously. Even the starbucks. good choice. XD
Can i have some more, please?
syawalina 2008-10-28 . chapter 1
Hey! it was beautifully written! I love that the setting's in KL! :)
lemon-mint-tic-tac 2008-10-27 . chapter 1
This is a nice read... It would take real courage to kiss some stranger out of the blue!
rissy 2008-10-27 . chapter 1
lightly entertaining and amusing. just like josie!! xD

um my first time reviewing so... no idea how it goes.
abit corny in certain ways. to complement the lightness of its romance (x

uhh... obviously based on experience xD malaysian readers will understand horr =D

its well done josie despite your finals being in a few days time 8D
ellyshaa. 2008-10-27 . chapter 1
Really sweet story :D
I think it was well written and I love the description of everything. And I like the Malaysian touch to it :)

loved reading it!
sugarlessgirl 2008-10-27 . chapter 1
BRAVO! I like the descriptions a lot and how you took the time to build up the story and let the readere get to know more about the personality of the narrator. I think this is definitely well-written.And I have to admit, that I can relate in a way with kissing strangers haha. Anyway, I noticed that there were a few grammatical errors and omitted words like the fourth paragraph in the second section, "Till this day, I don't what", I think you meant "Till this day, I don't know what"?

I enjoyed this a lot, keep writing~
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