Okay, really, that ending was cheesy but appropriately so and totally in keeping with the rest of the story. Ray has always been that way towards Jordan and Jordan didn't feel the need to have everything said in slow painfully obvious ways *whew*.
In short, really good story. I began reading a while back (few motnhs) then got distracted (thanks school) and had to re-read it. Totally worth it though. Good plot in this story.

Give us Dale story coz JOrdan and him kinda seemed incompatible. Dale would get along with someone who had similar experiences like him and/or know what he's going through. Do you know what kind of a person you want Dale to be with yet or are you still exploring?

Whatever, loverly story and keep writing hun. SAw some grammatic errors (minor) and stuff but nothing a whole bunch of updating won't get rid of. Hehe, so get to it then. chop chop.

I hope that Black Snake's bark is worse than his bite. :)

Hi! I really, really enjoyed this story. And yes, that's despite the cheesy ending. I mean, that ending was just the mother of all cliche happy endings! Lol. Kidding aside, you should be very proud of yourself with this story; it freakin' rocks! :)

Hey, I really liked this fic, and I know in your final author's note you said you knew there were a lot of unanswered questions, but are really too many. As much as I enjoyed reading I'm feeling really unsatisfied now that it's over. Hoping to see a sequel soon, hopefully that will make feel like this fic is actually over.

I loved this story and even with the cake sweet ending! I started reading it and couldn't stop is was so amazing...And I can't wait for your Dale story too! Again this story was amazingly good!!XD

Thanks so much...(=~.^=)...

OMG I liked totally LOVED this! It is honestly like on of the best fics I've ever read, seriously. It was kinda like a action/romance kinda thing and I just loved it! I didn't think the ending was cheezy at all I thought it was cute ans super sweet. As for parirings I'm torn between Dale/Jordan and Ray/Jordan I just thought they were both so equally cute together but either ways I'm happy so AWESOME JOB!

P.S. I can't wait to read the Dale fic ;D

TTYL
Karma~*~*~

Goodness, gracious, oh my! This really has to be the BEST story I have ever read in my life! You know, I, like most of your readers, really enjoyed the sexual scene between Dale and Jordan because they had to release that tension somehow. But at the same time it is so nice that Jordan did not really "do it" with Dale, and that Jordan has only been with Ray. Anyway, I just thought that it was perfect for Dale to leave, albeit heartbroken, and let Jordan run to Ray. I just loved this story! It would be awesome for you to write a continuation or even better, a whole new story!

Amy =]

Why hello there fellow Singaporean! :D I'm so thrilled to find another local (and of the same age!) that I decided to create an account just to drop you a review xD And maybe one day I'll summon the guts to write AND post a story of my own, heh.

This story is a great read for me, very sweet!

HI!
I haven't reviewed for this story before cause I wanted to give u my opinion at the end. What is my opinion I hear u ask?...
OO OO OO WRITE A SEQUEL! :P lol
Not by any means the most mature of answers but I so want there to be more. This is the first slash I've read nd I am so impressed. PLEASE write more, I beg of u! hehe
Hope u post more soon!
Have a gd week/month/wot ever!
Until we (hopefully) converse again... BYE!
x x x

Is everything an evil plan from Leo? Does he want to take over with the Mafia and by hurting Jordan he is also making his brother unable to direct it? Well... I'm going to keep reading XD Great story by the way.

Great story, keep up the good work.

I really loved the ending and overall this was a wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading this. :)

Aw! It's so cute! (laugh)
I wanna read a Dale story! Please write one!

The ending wasnt THAT chessy ^^
I'd read a Dale fic cause he just kicks **

I will definatly read a Dale story. i loved his character and cant wait for you to put up Dales story. I liked the endind to Rays and Jordan.