|Reviews for Conflicting|
| DarkRose1593 11/4/08 . chapter 1
This is a very good poem, it expresses so much emotion. I wasn't sure about the hyphens at first, but it was your way of writing and it's all-in-all pretty good. :)
| tabularasatabularasatabul 10/28/08 . chapter 1
I think the punctuation you use reflects the disjointed nature of your thoughts and emotions at the time really well
| Luna Turner 10/28/08 . chapter 1
I'm sorry for what inspired this poem.
I like how you expressed all that you were feeling. I'm sure many people can relate, and that's what will draw them to this piece.
However- I found the (-)irritating and it made it choppy. I don't know if this was your intention, but I would suggest maybe comas or seperating them in seperate lines.
I did enjoy reading this.