| Reviews for GUILTY |
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Lanie Is 9/19/09 . chapter 2Will you update this story? I like it lots. :] I hope you do... |
Amarantis 1/12/09 . chapter 2I love the story line and the narrator is so sweet and pulling as a character (Ryan as well). I'd love to read more. |
MrAshley420 11/7/08 . chapter 2Ah! I love it :] |
candiesnbunnies 11/6/08 . chapter 2I like the plot a lot... and the characters seem pretty fun. Actually, Ryan seems pretty cool ;) There's one thing I don't understand though: did she get the amnesia just after she had sex with ryan? or was it before? because if it was before then she would remember being with him, but she doesn't. But then, she does seem to know she has amnesia, so that tells us she knew she had amnesia before she was with ryan... I mean, she said she hadn't told Tom, but wouldn't that mean she knew she had amnesia before she forgot everything? does she have something like 50 first dates? because if it was that case she wouldn't have a clue... I'm completely confused. i mean, isn't amnesia when you forget everything? she does seem to have forgotten everything, except the fact that she HAS amnesia... am I making any sense? UGH! Even I'm confusing myself. Just please clear that up because I find this story REALLY cool and I want to keep reading! :D |
Carina 11/6/08 . chapter 2It's not a bad idea, but it's a bit unbelievable that she wouldn't let her parents or the doctors know about her post amnesia. I doubt her friends would care b/c then they could manipulate them however they wanted, especially her boy friend. |
Robyn Night 11/6/08 . chapter 2Uh-oh! That was a close one for Roxy! I can't believe that she isn't going to tell anybody she is an Amnesiac! It's not like that is something you can hide forever! i'm really starting to like the way this story is turning out! Keep updating! :) |
Hypa To Hell And Back 11/2/08 . chapter 1oh girl i love it. it is a great start. i will stay with you till the end ok. i loike it alot |
RebelianAngel 11/1/08 . chapter 1I like the idea behind this story alot. It's different from all the other romance stories on . I can't wait to see where it goes. |
MrAshley420 10/31/08 . chapter 1Good so far. |
Robyn Night 10/30/08 . chapter 1Cool, a new story! I like the beginning of it! I hope you're going to explain some more, becase right now, i'm kinda confused! :) That's ok though- now there are more chapters to write! Let me just say, i already don't like the sound of this 'Tom' (please tell me she's going to break-up with him!), and i reaalyy hope she gets her memory back! :) Ryan sounds so incredibly cool! |
Aurora Corona 10/29/08 . chapter 1the button looks more like purple than blue :P Great story, but it's sort of hard to take it all in at once. Confusing at first, but I like the plot idea. I think it's going a bit too rushed though... But maybe it's just me. Ryan sounds cool :D I think I like him already. The little note thing he wrote was pretty funny too :D love, SP |