Aw, this was so sweet. I loved the ending, that whole bit with Mitsuko.

the ending with Mitsuko and Hideki was funny...maybe you can make a sort of sequal thingy for Mitsuko and Hideki ^^ that would be cool

Juli!!

OMG!! Who woulda thought? I loved it! Nya!! I am very impressed with your writing. Oh, and I want to update you in case you missed it, but I added another chapter to vampire story, where...::shifty eyes::...you get some. ::cough::

So, go check it out!

Luv ya!
::chu::