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Kebin 2008-11-01 . chapter 2
Aiko ideas: General torture on her Sueness and such, USE the egging scene from the original (it was Koneko using a bra-slingshot into Hitomi's room where Aiko was kissing Keiya).

Azami: She trips onto a peach fuzz carpet. Naturally, she falls asleep and Naoki gets to have fun ^^. Then remove ALL copies of "James and the Giant Peach" from her room (she has at least 32,768).

This chapter: >D
Kebin 2008-10-30 . chapter 1
*nearly dies laughing* This was GOOD, Hitomi! I laughed so hard at the end... boy, Rai would literally die if Ouran High were a hentai anime - romantic yaoi comedy ^__^.
SoneAnna 2008-10-30 . chapter 1
It sounds really good so far, ^^And Rai sounds like a real bastard, XD...he deserved that.

But keep writing!!
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