ch. 7 is so good! I love how she didnt reaize he was a vampire from the beginning.

Cool story, hope to read more soon :)

Yes, very like Twilight, but I like it. Keep writing!

Well, you heeded my advise and made a title, which I think is pretty good. I can see this is gonna be a little like Twilight, but I think that's a good thing :D
keep writing!

Aw, is this the only chapter so far? It's good, just think of a title. I can kinda see where it's going, but I'm intrigued nonetheless. Anyway, think of a title and add a summary, and you'll be getting many more reviews than this one.