|Reviews for Standing Strong|
| A Free Elf 10/30/08 . chapter 1
Hmm, I have to be careful what I say here as I will admit I'm no fan of modern-styled poetry.
On the negative side, I didn't feel that your poem flowed very well. The start was good but you seemed to lose the rhythm you'd created in the second stanza.
However, there is a painful quality in the short, jagged lines that I hope is deliberate.
| EtikiXelot 10/30/08 . chapter 1