Ya know something funny? I read this one-shot on Halloween. xD Melanie seems like she was on some kinda acid trip the whole time! Twas quite the strange read but perfect for Halloween. :D xoxo

one of my favorites, haha. the whole axe murderer thing seriously surprised me, i rly didn't see that coming. oh but i did enjoy her accidentally stroking his beautiful nether "tail" haha i was grinning the whole time. awesome job :]

lol. um totally wasn't expecting that but totally cool anyway.

O.o James creeps me out abit...weird.

Um...funny one-shot!

The supernatural element was a bit much (esp. considering how there wasn't much foreshadowing), but despite the crazy axeman element, this was really cute. I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:

and would that halloween be the one where came over to the fireworks

lol, this story made me laugh... you always do!

Awesome one-shot XD it was so funny that she thought he tried to kill her because of the fake invite XD laughed my ass off there ^^ 'oh my god, he knows about the fake invite' epic XD

Hm Interesting. A little more sexual actionie that I normally get from you but I like it. Not sure about the creepy axe murder thing but hey it works.

Congrats.
You've just won the prize for the stupidest title.

Hey good story. um not really anything else to say you're good and you know well you should but if you don't by now me telling you won't make you belive it.

I dont celebrate haloween, but i love this one-shot. Humor, romance and fantasy (or supernatural or whatever)? combined with a tiny bit of horror? what more can I ask for? Lots of love!

Very cute. And different, especially the mermaid thing. Lol.

Just, I wonder why you put this in the poetry thing?

Ri

=D
This is possibly my favourite oneshot of yours that i've ever read.
I loved it :)
I quite loved the whole, twist thing. You know. with the creepy axe-murderer boy, and the merman :D Unexpected. I like it :)
Oh! and LOL. @ Melanie. The whole thing with the music. That was funny :)

Awesome work, as always

YES! YOU DID IT! HURRAH!
Lmao this part made me laugh hard: "I also tell him my bra undoes at the front, and he tells me to keep on dreaming and then drives me home."