|Reviews for The Murderous Maiden|
| Decoris Verbum 11/25/08 . chapter 1
Yes! I love this piece! However, if there were one thing to fix it would be a rather complex and advanced element of poetry, but very essential to a good poem nonetheless: syllables. There should be a syllabic pattern throughout the poem, or a rhyming poem at least. Otherwise the rhymes are cast useless as the flow is butchered. Otherwise, fantastic job!
| VelvetyCheerio 10/30/08 . chapter 1
Creepy. It was good though, I could see poe's element of rhyme scheme in there. Nice work.