It's so...startling.

I'm getting a muddled picture.

I have a semi-idea of what the first part is, but I'm not altogether sure.

And the second part connects with the first part,

but the third part utterly confuses me.

But your writing is really good. It cuts and it scratches, and it makes me feel so curious, but it's perplexing in a good way;]

I can't even describe what I mean.

creepy.

This seems tragic and yet it's not quite as straight cut and easy to interpret as you think at the beginning.

Powerful and sickening, whilst twisting into ambiguity. How intriguing.

This gave me chills.

damn.. first that was really well-written and it just gave me goosebumps.

Oh wow. I love the way you wrote this. It's so creepy but sad at the same time. A nice trick you did was you created pathos for the girl at first but then I'm not sure exactly what it was but by the end the reader is left unsure if this pathos is misplaced. I think it was this phrase, which by the way was just the cherry on top:

"It's not rape if you ask and Sweets, you were asking."

Nicely done.

Beautiful, i understand this all too well, keep writing your good :)