I like this right here: "Reminds me that I looked at her/And that she was looking back/So that even though the pain is there/I may still be on track". Hope is a good thing. I have similar hopes, I think, that he'll want me back, but at the same time, even if he does, I don't want him. I like this poem though, it's really nice and well written. I like the constant use of the eyes.