this was really good, you probably could have put in more description so that the reader can really feel like they are there. you could alsso make it clearer who says what, but appart from that, i really loved it.
Loved the idea.
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Holy crap. That's the first thing that came to my mind when I finished reading this. My brother told me that a good story is one that makes you feel something like sadness or anger. I guess your story was good. Actually, it was good. It was really good.

a lovely story, truly!

So why is the snow white? D:

really enjoyed the one-shot!
great work!

That was such a warm and heart-felt story. I really got into it, despite how short it was. I seriously adored it.