I adore it. I know how hard it is to rhyme without using the same words over, and you pulled it off really well. I love how you write about sinful pleasures without remorse. Kudos!

You know what, I loved that. Really loved it. Especially these lines 'Disentangling herself, she leaves

On quiet feet meant for thieves’
Gorgeous work... the content is original, at least lol. =]

wow you got your point across

hahaha. you know I like this poem. Especially the ending. It just ties it up so nicely.