Wow, i really felt this one. I can relate to it well. Kudos!

My favorite

im speachless :] your poetry has such a good way of putting real emotion into the reader. And it dosent matter that its all jumbled together its still good...great :)

Aw... "I am sorry that my best was not good enough. I am sorry I expected it to be." That just made me cry!

I really like this. Sure it's jumbled up, but are thoughts ever really in a straight, perfect line that we can follow easily? I didn't think so. :) I really understand what you're saying here, and I think this really is pretty.