|Reviews for To You|
| wordsofjade 12/22/08 . chapter 1
Wow, i really felt this one. I can relate to it well. Kudos!
| Ganondorf The Dark Knight 12/11/08 . chapter 1
| UnicornSlayer 12/11/08 . chapter 1
im speachless :] your poetry has such a good way of putting real emotion into the reader. And it dosent matter that its all jumbled together its still good...great :)
| Broken Winged Bird 10/30/08 . chapter 1
Aw... "I am sorry that my best was not good enough. I am sorry I expected it to be." That just made me cry!
I really like this. Sure it's jumbled up, but are thoughts ever really in a straight, perfect line that we can follow easily? I didn't think so. :) I really understand what you're saying here, and I think this really is pretty.