Oh, wow. This was so short and simple, and yet, I found I loved it. My heart went out to a coyote.

The last line makes the piece.

~Effervescent-Sentiments

Wow. The last line really hit me. I'm still amazed at your ideas - I wish I could put such brilliant thoughts into words.

aww... the navy poet. i bet the girls go nuts after you, because this is very good. about moving on... unfortunate, but necessary

i liked this one

I love this, just so you know. The shortness makes the point have to be very pronounced and such. Congrats, I really like the animal inclusions, as well.

poor thing :(

The second line confused me with the pronouns. I couldn't tell if the she was the her the other one was searching for. I might get rid of the she if it is. So that it's "for her-hit.." then it's obviously describing the her.

I like the piece though, the word choices are great and I like the ending a lot. Really great job.