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Jarield 2009-11-06 . chapter 14
Okay, you finally updated! Well good job. I’m not into loving this chapter; but it is a good transition chapter. It just gave more mystery and suspense in the story. You are giving so much twists that it is sometimes driving me crazy. I wanna know what will happen next, I want to know the answers in the riddles. I hope you could upload the succeeding chapters not later than soon.

I guess right now, I’m just thankful to see an update from you.
Tily Everly 2009-11-01 . chapter 14
Wish him a happy birthday for me ;)
Good as always. They should do a world tour hehehe.

Tily
:)
Aspen Summers 2009-07-08 . chapter 12
I like this story, but I felt that the outtakes interrupted the flow of it. Maybe if you put them at the end, or just removed them completely, it would be easier to read.

~Felicity
RYTwinDemon 2009-06-30 . chapter 12
I love your sense of imagery for the Council, and generally, for this chapter. Excellent work!! Vergil is an interesting character to behold, as well.
RYTwinDemon 2009-06-30 . chapter 10
Poor Spike. He seems like too much a good person to really be a vampire; I really like that point about him. Great job with this chapter.
RYTwinDemon 2009-06-30 . chapter 9
I laughed when I saw the 'Prof. Flirts-a-lot'. I'm glad there's a development between Spike and Rose's relationship, they really are cute together. :-D
RYTwinDemon 2009-06-30 . chapter 8
Very interesting. I can't wait to see where this leads to. You have an excellent sense of imagination.
RYTwinDemon 2009-06-30 . chapter 7
This chapter was EXCELLENT! It was hilarious, Trace is absolutely my favorite of your characters! Hahaha, I really do like Rose as well. This chapter was done well!
RYTwinDemon 2009-06-30 . chapter 6
Yay! More interaction between Spike and Rose!! I really do think they're cute together. Your characters are hilarious, by the way. Especially Twilight. :-D
RYTwinDemon 2009-06-30 . chapter 5
Pax's powers and his thirst are also very interesting! I like the way Spike is indeed trying very hard to control himself from biting people; it shows his vulnerability. I also like the way you've made Spike seem very human, not some out-of-this world vampire who's too good to be true. Great job!
RYTwinDemon 2009-06-30 . chapter 4
I love the way you make the supernaturals unique in their own ways, such having different types of 'thirst'. I think it's very intriguing. And I'm starting to like Trance, he seems quite cute. :-D
RYTwinDemon 2009-06-30 . chapter 3
I can't believe he forgot her already! Poor Rose. Anyway, I liked the concept of Spike's memories being sucked out to wake him from a nightmare, it was cool! Keep up the good work!
RYTwinDemon 2009-06-30 . chapter 2
I laughed when I saw Spike's comment about being broke, that was funny. :-D The conversation between Spike and Rose was interesting, I can't wait to see where their relationship goes!
RYTwinDemon 2009-06-30 . chapter 1
Hmm, this story is quite interesting! :-D I'm excited to see where this goes, but I honestly think that a little more description would spicen up the story more. Other than that, excellent job!
LadyWinchester 2009-06-19 . chapter 12
Hey guys. Just giving my readers (old a new) a heads up with my updates.I'll be sure to update as soon as I'm free from tests. I've just started my first sem as a College Freshman so @_@ there.

Also,let's keep our fingers crossed for the Supernatural Awards. I hope P.S bags something :D

The Pandora Character drawing contest is on going and is still open to those interested. Just refer to my Profile here or go to my Homepage )

Some have submitted their interpretations so I hope you check them out too! And of course read my story ;p

Thanks guys! I'll be missing you all.

'til the next showtime,
LadyWinchester
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