It was good. In a tragic, doomed sort of way. I like that. Knowing from the beginning that things end badly, and just going back to the beginning and go through the events leading to that end/beginning. I also like that we got to see how happy they were together, up to the very end.

Also, extra points for originality!!
I like that your vampires don't mind sunlight.
That their bite *can* leave wounds
And finally that they can be affected by drugs (even though from what I understood Jaden did not expect to be affected by them...).

I'm not big on drugs so I won't fave this, but this was really really good, and I'll definitely check out your other stories!

I don't think I would have the courage to submit a slash story as a school assignment, so I commend you for doing that. XD

Cheers!

ima vry this is so sad!
i really like charlie

That was sad, but good.