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TwoTeens 2009-11-10 . chapter 3
Oh I love it! I was excited to see an update.
Keita01 2009-10-28 . chapter 3
Well, this story just keeps getting more and more interesting with each chapter. I wish you'd up date it more frequently though. ^_^
paradox13 2009-10-25 . chapter 3
Switching POV in the story is often tricky, but you made it even more absorbing, impressive and now I am dying for more.
Felinity 2009-10-24 . chapter 3
very nice twist to the plot, i thought this was just going to be a good one shot but it seems like its going to get even better :)
i love it!
Poptart Guava Kid 2009-10-24 . chapter 3
BWAHAHAHAHAHA. Hahaha...fun. You are good. Very good.
Esquirella 2009-10-24 . chapter 3
Cool plot!
Jixnce 2009-10-23 . chapter 3
Ooh. Interesting :P Creepy teacher. o.o
JtheChosen1 2009-10-23 . chapter 3
AMAZING COMEBACK HERE!

Omg, such a great plot twist! I really like how you described Josh as well, total stud!
200meters 2009-10-23 . chapter 3
Yay, a birthday update! I love this story, and I can't wait to see what happens next, even if it takes until next Halloween!
Sheepie 2009-07-12 . chapter 2
Aww, just one more part? I was hoping there'd be even more then that! I like Peter and Kris. I was hoping this be a whole new, long story.

Anyways, great chapter! I loved it. :) Very hot. I like Peter and Kris, as said before. So I can't wait for the next part!
Treign 2009-06-21 . chapter 2
*applauds* Beautiful! I love everything you write, i do believe. Keep it up!
PyroTech 2009-06-15 . chapter 2
awesomeness ^^
frogs of war 2009-06-03 . chapter 2
"Did rabies make you ** dudes you'd just met?" I've heard it does. Watch out for the randy raccoons.

Cute.

The morning after would be extra awkward because it least if you were drunk you would have an excuse, even if it is a bad one.

Peter, ever the gentleman. I hope Kristopher's clothes aren't ruined. He must have put a lot of effort into those.

I like both Kristophers, the aggressive one and the shy one. I look forward to the next part.
Coco Bean Cake 2009-05-31 . chapter 2
For as fast as this happened, it really doesn't seem like it. Lol.

Little Horndogs those two are! :D

Great job, I didn't see any spelling/grammar mistakes.
:D
kestrel 2009-05-27 . chapter 2
I liked it! And not just because we got smut twice in one chapter! I have to laugh at Peter, he's got such an amusing way of putting things sometimes and I like reading his way of describing things. But God is he a lucky duck - Who says you have to go out to the clubs to meet guys? I sat at home on my **, and one came to me - don't we all wish it was that easy? Lol and it was unbelievably funny hearing Peter thinking he'd killed Kristopher from sex only to find out he'd just fallen asleep from sexhaustion. Poor guy. But damn you made him witty. Have I mentioned how much I like his personality? Lol, I love the way you have him look at things and put it out through his own view like when he's dealing with his stepdad. I know he's just a character from a short story but if you were to use him in a longer multichaptered story I would think he was a really interesting character to read about and he would make you want to keep reading more even from just the little you've developed of him so far. I'd love to say the same for Kristopher but other than him going "feral" (lols, sorry) and then having an about turn personality the next morning there's not a lot to say. But I guess that's to be expected when it's being told from Peter's pov, not Kris's. I'm looking forwards to the next installment, mainly cos I haven't got a clue where you're going to go with this. I love surprises!
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