So you update yearly or something, I like how Keyd Alan relationship is progressing even if it's a little slow for my taste. I'm glad he doesn't curse as much, it was just like Damon, Davenport mouth much? In the beginning

This guy's mama didn't raise him very well! So far he keeps drinking and eating in front of his guests and has never offered them anything! Sheesh! Give them a bad impression of our Earthly manners, dude! :)
Loving this story more with each chapter. So different than anything I've encountered - and I read a ton!

Ha okay I'm ready for some more chapters to be posted now.
I really like the book so far and I think Law either secretly likes Alan or he's the person helping that evil guy.

LOL as always I love Alan's thought process and I just love him as a character as a whole. So realistic and funny. I really am anticipating how his relationship with Keyd develops! I also hope that my hunch that Law is the Clarbach's little bitch that is tipping him off. I also think that Law is totally into Alan. IDK keep up the great work! I really enjoy this story (:

Goddd I need my Tenebrism fix *Bothers you to update*

Gah.

Curse you.

I can't believe I got so hooked on a story that gets updated like once a year.

Slash stories.

They will be the end of me.

But, the upside is that I now have a new person to badger for faster updates.

Badger.

Badger badger.

Badger badger badger.

BADGER BADGER BADGER.

UPDATE.

-Shay

Oh ho ho! There's a tracking spell on the shoe, isn't there? Didn't Alan lose both shoes? Where's the other one? omg!

This was a really great read so far, though. I like how incredibly awkward Alan is with Keyd and vice versa. And how awkward Keyd is and how it totally reads as intimidating, but... isn't. Basically, can't wait to read more and thanks for writing this!

The part they gazed at the star was kind of..idk, fluffy? My heart was all warm and fuzzy at that part ;D I love this. It never fails to get me imagined the situation and the communication between characters.

This story is amazing so far! I like the thoughtful pacing and the development of the characters. Keyd is adorable and mysterious and Rysa is a fun and tough character. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Sweet chapter! It had me snorting like a manic in my colllege library! lol I don't remmember if you included the bit about the shoe in your first draft, but it was certainly a nice knot for that particular loose end. I honestly thought a hobo took it, or it was pilliged by a bunch of squerlls intent in making Alan's shoe a diety or somthing.

Slowly we get the relationship going between them...

Omg please update soon! This is getting interesting and I would like to see more.

oooo
OOO
SO MUCH
FOR JUST ONE OF YOUR CHAPTERS
I FEEL LIKE everytime i read just one chapter
I've bought the best of the best and I'm still wallowing in money
(oh and psst I have reasons to believe that Law is with Aiheel and that shoe has another tracking spell on it OOO)

Is it sad that 6 chapters of no boylove I, now, consider slow slash? I think it is (darn you crappy yaoi stories that I keep reading out of boredom!).

I think I like that Keyd and Alan are first entering a rocky acquaintanceship before any infatuations occur (if the slash is even between them - I have learned not to assume ): ).

Thank you for updating, it's been a while.