I love this! It is amazingly written. I'm a huge fan of Victoria Frances as well and I think this is great!

"She didn’t realise just how happy she had been until it was all over, he was gone." That line...is very powerful, and very true. I can really relate to your character...good job.

Hey Holli.

This shall be the shortest review I will ever give you - not because this piece is incredibly awful or amazing, but because it connected with me. Too much. It made me sad, which, I suppose, is a good thing, but it leaves my reviewing mind a little empty and bland. I honestly can't tell you what I think of the work because I can't see beyond my own experiences this time. I'm sorry. I hope you receive the reviews you deserve from others.

Wren