Whoa...I really liked the end! So cliffy!

That was an aw-mazing story! Totally halloween!! Poor Alley, though.

Again, wonderful job; you kept me sitting at the edge of my chair!!

*Midnight-Wolfe*

Nice Story. Although, I felt that Benjamin should have been more sorrowful and the police more active.
I agree with you, it is one of my favorite by you. The ending was great; it leaves me hanging.