You did a great job describin the scenario! I actually really like the "I remember your vomit" part :p Interesting... keep it up!

wow...very sublty intense( if you get what i mean)- like the words themselves arent like moody or emotional, but put them together and they're really effective...btw did i review a story of yours before...do i know you in some way. cause you sent a review saying your sprry it took so long...i was a tad confused, but enjoyment took over once i read your lovely comment...i iwsh i was better at analysiing exactly why i really liked your poem so much...i just did...the moods so causal yet the subject is *oo-er* less casual...in a way (see i told you i was bad at this, it reminds me too much of doing critical essay writing in english) anywho, yeah basically i liked it quite alot XD

xox RRGF