 ImmortalIncarnate 2009-03-09 . chapter 10Ah! Yay! update with another chapter soon kay? I'm rather enjoying this plot twist. It's okay if you don't know where to go, just let it play out in different directions in you mind, then follow through with the best ones. I like how Adam seems to want more of a relationship, and how Daimon keeps showing up in her sleep. Maybe he's trying to communicate?
I really do hope you finish this story because I can't wait for the part where she talks with the devil...
Good luck, sorry for not reviewing in awhile, I've been busy. Writing my own weird manga-esque stories. They just come to me eh?
ImmortalIncarnate |
 pinkeclipse 2009-02-16 . chapter 10thanks for updating!! |
 OnMyWayToGettingLost 2009-02-06 . chapter 9 You should continue with this story! I know how hard it gets towards the middle but I'm positive that you can do it. It will turn out fabulous. |
 Holly 2009-01-22 . chapter 9 You want a review, here you go. I do love the story you have started and I believe you should continue it. But I sure hope that you plan to stray away from Twilight a bit more. This is sounding like you took the story of twilight and changed the supernatural creature and little details. It mirrors twilight to much for you to really say that you fully wrote this story yourself. I would continue if only to prove me wrong. I like your writing, it's not overly sappy and quick and your characters are interesting. Kepp up the good work. |
 Sadie 2009-01-22 . chapter 9 This story is GREAT! I can't wait for the next update! |
 pinkeclipse 2009-01-21 . chapter 9thank you! |
 OnMyWayToGettingLost 2008-12-26 . chapter 8 Hurray! Good chapter. I got a little confused with the time. How long has it been since Damion left? |
 pinkeclipse 2008-12-24 . chapter 1love the story!! read up to where you are now, chapter 7. it was a little confusing at first, still is a little, but i do love it! please continue writing! |
 pinkeclipse 2008-12-24 . chapter 2thank you for the chapter! |
 pinkeclipse 2008-12-24 . chapter 3thanks for the chapter. |
 pinkeclipse 2008-12-24 . chapter 4thanks for the chapter |
 pinkeclipse 2008-12-24 . chapter 5thanks for the chapter!! |
 pinkeclipse 2008-12-24 . chapter 6thanks for the chapter |
 pinkeclipse 2008-12-24 . chapter 7thanks for the chapter! |
 pinkeclipse 2008-12-24 . chapter 8adam really does care for her!! |