OMG! This story is absolutely rivveting! I do hope you keep writing chapters. You should publish this as an autobiographical work! Your writing style is so realistic. It puts the immages in my head to the point where I can feel your pain through the words alone. I can't believe your mother was such an evil *! I'm so glad you got the hell out of there! I will keep checking for updates on this story! Please keep writing it, and then make sure it gets published. This is a story which is worth getting published. Also, what happend with Siara? Please check out some of my stories?

Well...this chapter was really intense and it really got to me in some points...your writing is pretty powerful. I can relate to some things in here and I bet a lot of other people can too. Nice job.
xkatt

Your story seems like it's going to develop nicely. I already gave you edits on it so just work on those key points I mentioned and your writing will be AMAZING. That's not saying that it isn't already, just keep up the good work!
xkatt