Oh! I got goosebumps!

Whoa, deep! :O :D

I like how you incorporated (sorry i cant spell xD) daily things like Sharpies into the poem. Great job! :D

-xx

Wow, most teen angst-y! Angst-Tastic!

I really don't know what to say on this one, more than I liked it. Hah, and I feel more sorry for Al than ever before. Your soul is so confusing!

But that's a good thing. We can't be understood, or else we are no longer our own.

Very good. fav.

O.B.

"call them teachers" we must by necessity, no?

Im going to be perfectly honest. It reeks of teenage angst. Seems like it comes strait from the heart though. It is very good. I am not going to lie. I like it.