I liked it. But I have some comments. Even then the old Gameboys weren't as big as a gun. But other than that it's an awesome story. I love the end. "Your Mom liked it too!" Genius!

I really enjoyed reading this! It was definitely a shooting story that stood out from all the others I've read, and I liked the happy ending and how it played out. It was completely realistic, and something that kind of hits you on the inside, and makes you realize what really goes on in people's lives behind closed doors sometimes. Wonderful job!

There should be more Madison Blankos in the world, no doubt.

I really enjoyed this - well written, a nice subject and charismatic characters (even if it is a short story).

And, by the way, I'm spending more time saying 'hello' from now on (:

omg this is really sweet and really true. too bad their can't be happy endings like that... or maybe their are, yet no one will ever hear about them?

anyways, i loved it ]

Emmy