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53BookTitles 2009-11-11 . chapter 23
Such a great story, please continue!!
Duuude 2009-11-10 . chapter 23
Very cute. :D
I want you to bring their parents into it. It'll make it a lot more official. And she really needs to visit her mom. It seems like she's nice to everyone but her own mom. I'd think she would want to be involved with Alyssa Jane a little. :| That's not very nice, Julie!
:P
Anyway, I cannot wait for the next chapter. I'm loving this. At first, I wasn't so keen on the idea of reading about a nanny. And then I wasn't so happy about reading about a girl that didn't have a happy ending with the father of her baby.
But then Aaron came into the picture. :) He's great. I'm glad Julie realizes he's too awesome to throw away!
Duuude 2009-11-10 . chapter 20
Great, just great! STUPID SHANNON'S GOING TO RUIN EVERYTHING NOW.
Argh.
Oh well, at least they're finally together now. :)
Duuude 2009-11-09 . chapter 15
Have I ever told you how much I love Julie? She's so amazing. :D
I love Aaron! I can't believe I even believed stupid Matt. What an asshole he is. :|
Stupid stupid Matt. I don't blame Julie at all for believing there was a chance he'd ditch Emma for her. I mean, she was good with Anna, she was nice, she was beautiful. So I wasn't completely stupid for thinking he migt have fallen in love with her.
Or I was maybe a little too optimistic. :(
Anyway, I shall move on to the next chapter. I love this! :)
lbbabey 2009-11-08 . chapter 1
This is a really interesting story and I'm really interested in seeing where this is heading. Julie seems like a very likable if naive character, which is just fine. There seems to be a trend these days for strong female characters who always know what they're about, which gets kind of boring after a while. The one thing that made the story hard to get into was that there was a LOT of exposition at the beginning. While the background information is nice, the story would come off stronger if there was more showing versus telling. For example, you include the actual scene where Julie lost her virginity or the moment when she found out Mr. Right was actually Mr. Not-so-Right. There're various ways you can work this to your advantage.
WOVEYOU 2009-10-12 . chapter 22
love the story line :) hope you can update soon because i'm going to have a hard time waiting. thanks for the awesome story
Rosey-Blue 2009-10-07 . chapter 23
Aaron is awesome! i really like him.
i loved the part where they are waiting for the doctor n she takes his picture. so cute.
Kimberly Beckwith 2009-10-07 . chapter 23
OMG LOVED IT! lol Im soo happy he want to take all the resoponsebilaty for the baby now that the kind of man i would want!!
chng234 2009-10-06 . chapter 23
things r going well between aaron n julie. is the story coming to an end?
Alenor 2009-10-06 . chapter 23
haha, great chappie. a little girl!! nice name, can't wait for more ~ Alenor
batzmaru347 2009-10-06 . chapter 23
I'm surprised that Matt hasn't interfered. I hope he won't start exerting his parental rights over Aaron after the baby is born.
animegirl214 2009-10-06 . chapter 23
aw! hahaha.
thanks for the chapter!! :D
Amaryllis Faye 2009-10-06 . chapter 23
you are so so talented and im so jealous i cant even say it. hahaha..,, i loved this chapter. it was perfect.
xoxokristen 2009-10-06 . chapter 23
great chapter! please update again soon!
mzwynn90 2009-10-06 . chapter 23
You have no idea how glad I am to read anything from you. With that whole plagiarism controversy, you're one of the few great authors left. I think I just recently started reading The Promotion (like, yesterday), and I'm so hooked I don't know what to do with myself. If I could find myself an Aaron, I'd be so happy!

This chapter is pure fluff, which I love :D Aaron is amazing. I feel sort of bad for Leigh right now...I wonder what's going to happen next!
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